Drumming

Sounds When The World Ends

Wee-oo Wee-oo is the sound of the world ending.

Rockmalen falling knocking your body over.

People calling out help help, waving their hands in the air.

Suddenly comes a volcano and bowls them over.

Red lava making its way. Slowly and gently.

Animals bodies got burnt towards the wall, peoples bodies are dead.

Then the tsunami comes and washes all the volcano away and all the burnt stuff.

Water every flushing people downwards and washing people away from their family.

My Poem

I found a rat under my mat,

I get a bat before it escape my mat.

A mat without a rat, we wouldn't use the bat.

I see a dog, which makes me wanna eat hot dog.

Meat is so yummy it makes me wanna rub my tummy.

Sausages are tasteful it makes my tummy rumble. My tummy grumbles for some apple crumble. I wanna ride but my car died. It was so sad to see my mum and dad so mad. I saw a horse ridding of course. My dog has a brown hair that it want me to stare.

My Poem

Millions of stuff, stuck inside,

Yep, his nose is that wide:

A hammer and a wrench,

A barbell and a bench,

A baseball and a bat,

smaller than dog and a cat,

A sofa and a chair,

An antique that is rare,

Lots of clutter, cluttering his nose,

Flying out, whenever he blows.

When he blows, it makes his nose show,

I saw a cat in my hat, I peek in and I said what's that.

Poem analysis

My Poem About Autumn

   Poem

One cold freezing day,

I went outside to play,

I was crushing the leaves on my way,

I saw an orange leaf,

but when I came closer,

it turned green,

It became windy and it made,

heaps of leaves  fall,

A season without any weather,

I see birds falling down with dead feathers.

Leaves are falling down,

making people rake the ground,

Leaves are brown just like the ground,

Autumn a season ,

Full of great things,

A season that brings,

Happiness to people,

animals and many things.

Comparing - Writing at home and at school

Genre of Writing

Facts And Opinion

Fact Or Opinion

Sunday is the best day of the week.

           Opinion

Waitangi Day is celebrated in February.

Fact

Christmas is celebrated in Summer.

Fact

Some families eat lots of food at birthdays.

Opinion

Watching fireworks on the 5th of November is lots of fun.

Opinion

April is a month with 30 days.

Fact

There are 12 months in the year.

Fact

This has been a terrible week.

Opinion

Spring is the most beautiful season of all.

Fact

Monday, Wednesday, and Friday are weekdays.

Opinion

The first day of the school year is scary.

Opinion

Everyone should make Valentine's Day cards.

Opinion

Your birthday comes only one day a year.

Fact

Fact Or Opinion

Investigate, write about and illustrate one of these strange creatures.

The Lonely Taylor

I am so lonely.People are lonely but they build walls instead of bridges. 

Sometimes I can be scared being alone. I'm lonely here by myself.I am always by myself.

Perfect Classroom

This is my perfect classroom. I chose this classroom because it has new styles and it looks really fancy.I like this classroom because it's modern.I hope you like my class room.

My New School Uniform

            Design a new school uniform and a new school emblem. Make up a new school motto.

This is my new school T-shirt.

T.P.S Is The Best

Your school needs more children or it will close.Design an advertisement highlighting some positive things about your school. 

Tamaki is so AWESOME because we have netbooks and free wireless.

Tamaki is so COOL because we win most of our sport games.

Our school is so FAMOUS that we got posted on the newspaper.

Tamaki Primary School is AWESOME because we have the most beautiful teacher.

Tamaki is a real HIGH STANDARD school because we have kids that have achieved their work and  kid that has been put up a level.
                                                       OUR SCHOOL IS THE BEST!!!

Punctuation, Grammar and Tenses

How To Screen Shot

Writing T2W2

This week we are focusing on procedural writing.we are beginning the literacy cycle with 'with planning;This Is our group brainstorm for possible ideas to write a procedure for.Our audience is Y4-6 classes.Come back to see my final piece of writing on Friday.  

My Neon Scarf Poem

This is my metaphor poem about a neon scarf.
This what I have created...